AatR Audition Page 1

I hope I got what we were supposed to do right. It goes from left to right, by the way... just for those who mainly read manga like me... it was so weird at first. 6.9
*God I fail*

So yes... this is the first page of my audition for AatR It was a bit rushed, because I'm really bad at time management (I'm trying to get better at it). And I hope I got the idea right... now that's the second time I said that. I must have jinxed myself. Curses.

EDIT: FONT: COMFORTAA, BY ~aajohan

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First page: You are here! Congrats. (:
Second page: [link]
Third page: [link]
Fourth page: [link]

[[Critique welcome]]

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