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You would not believe how mad I am at myself right now. But as they say, something is better than nothing. :/
Even if I totally flunk this round, I'm going to finish this. KILL ME IF I DON'T FINISH IT.
Leona (c) =Second-Person-Point
Ragdoll (c) ~TeachMeMogster and ~Pandachu
ROUND ONE
<Page 1//[link] >
<Page 2//[link] >
<Page 3//[link] >
<Page 4//[link] >
<Page 5>
<Page 6//[link] >
<Page 7//[link] >
<Page 8//[link] >
LINKED!
Even if I totally flunk this round, I'm going to finish this. KILL ME IF I DON'T FINISH IT.
Leona (c) =Second-Person-Point
Ragdoll (c) ~TeachMeMogster and ~Pandachu
ROUND ONE
<Page 1//[link] >
<Page 2//[link] >
<Page 3//[link] >
<Page 4//[link] >
<Page 5>
<Page 6//[link] >
<Page 7//[link] >
<Page 8//[link] >
LINKED!
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really good job with small gestures, by the way, and also with odd angles like in panel 2.
panels are still too crowded with text; maybe try changing the size of some. louder, more important statements are larger, and quieter, less important ones are smaller.
I really don't understand how she goes from 'I don't care who he is I just have to get his soul' to 'WHO WERE YOU??'. Her knowing who he was and seeing him more as a person seems like it would only hinder her :s
panels are still too crowded with text; maybe try changing the size of some. louder, more important statements are larger, and quieter, less important ones are smaller.
I really don't understand how she goes from 'I don't care who he is I just have to get his soul' to 'WHO WERE YOU??'. Her knowing who he was and seeing him more as a person seems like it would only hinder her :s